Critically discuss why is it important to look at industry factors such as industrial organisation when making a business case
Introduction – punchy intro makes it crystal clear what the take home message is
Style, readability interest – an exciting exposition of a difficult area
Structure – leads the reader on from point to point themes clearly presented
Research – detailed research has been done. Clear in dephtknowledge displayed.draws on a wide variety of sources including some unexpected
Evaluation and critical analysis – excellent synthesis. Source treated critically and some original, insightful and creative comments.
Conculsion – hits hard
