I have send the file to my instructor and she gave me a feedback what to fix, she wrote a lot of comments in the file that will be attached to tale look at it, and also she mentioned that is isa PHP proposal essay I don’t want that I have told you it is for an undergraduate level, also she gave me a secondary sources I want you to take a look at and use it in this research paper. In over all I need it the same topic that u have used it the proposal essay. if there is something not clear please let me know before you get start. read her comments carefully. below some feedback she wrote it to me. also in the previous essay that will be attached explained everything .
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When I sent you back your proposal, I would have indicated whether or not you needed new sources. This is what I wrote when I sent you back the last proposal:
“You still need to get a better bibliography and include some of the things that I suggested in the last draft that you sent up (I think that I even gave you the links for them) – these are the primary sources and need to be in the bibliography”
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i want make sure you the same writer and if you have any question let me know and i don’t want you make it high advance
