Jingwen Jiang
Outline
General purpose: to persuade my pay attention to video game addiction
Specific purpose: to persuade my audience to support the video game rehab.
Thesis: our society should establish video game rehab and colleges and high schools should pay attention to student’s addiction to video games.
[Introduction]
- Attention getter: give some statistic about addicted gamer.
- Introduce topic: the negative effects of video games.
- Thesis:should pay attention to video game addiction
- Establish credibility: give examples about my friends those had been dismissed by UD
- Preview:
[Body]
- Main point#1: Symptoms of video game addiction
- Main point#2:Physical effects on video game addiction
- Main point#3: Although e-sports industry is formed well now(few people can really make it as their career)
[Conclusion]
- Signpost: It is necessary to have video game rehab
- Summary:Video game addiction is just like alcohol addiction
- Restate thesis:healthy after class activity
- Clincher: