I would like you to take a look at my dissertation please, where you will proof read it and apply some minor language flow changes. the main change will be regarding my Supervisor’s comments. He saw 3 issues, I would like you to have a read through and edit it for me please. I do not expect the changes to take more than 1100 words. Please read it carefully and make sure the changes are made in context. I will write a message with further instructions. Thanks