conclusion (around 600 – 900 words ) +
recommendation (around 1100 – 1400 words)
Furthermore, my supervisor from school has given me feedback. His sayings are mentioned in orange, mine in purple and black bold indicates where our sayings referring to. I think the document I upload will speaks for itself, but if you have any questions, please let me know.
PS: The revisions you make, please indicate them in another color then black / orange / purple, so your answers will be easier for me to read (the different color is not necessary for conclusion and recommendation, but for your revision I would prefer it).