Narrative essay: one thing that unforgettable on summer vacation.
The thing is i came to my friend\’ birthday party on June 30 in Chengdu, China. (Create something funny during birthday party). My friend\’s boyfriend made a song for her, and sing during party. We went to KTV,(KTV is a place for singing). That\’s my first to Chengdu, i feel excited. I came to Chengdu for her party, the second day i go back to Shenzhen.
This history, you make this history more funny, more coherent.