It would be great if you could revise my essay and make it flow better by changing sentence structure.
In addition, please shorten length of my essay because I currently have 602 words rather than 500 words.
The topic is listed below.
Please explain how your experiences have prepared you to enter the Touro College of Pharmacy. This is a chance to share your personal journey beyond what you have described in your PharmCAS application. If there are special challenges you feel you had to overcome in the course of your education that should be considered in evaluating your application, please discuss them here. Please do NOT exceed 500 words. Do NOT repeat the PharmCAS Personal Statement.
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Thank you in advance and I’ll post my primary essay for having a better idea of my situation.
** The file name Secondary is the one you need to help me out.
Thank you so much and I really appreciate your help.
