Dear Writer,
Greetings.
I will start with you to work on my dissertation by first thing: Introduction chapter.
As you know we have worked on EEDRIP module together which will help us in dissertation. But, if you will take some information from my EEDRIP course work I need two things:
1. Edit and adjust mistakes through read feedback from my supervisor (I have attach it with order under name ‘Feedback EEDRIP’.
2. Don’t take it copy past please to avoid self-plagiarism.
I need please in the Introduction divide it to two sections, first Background second; Aim and Objective.
Kindly, write strong justification to:
What is important?
Why my topic important?
Why I want to detect Alzheimer early?
If we will detect disease early, what we will do?
In the aim and objective;
Please change them (Not like in my EEDRIP module) my supervisor don’t like them.
Please write:
To determine specificity of MRI to ……..Etc.
To determine sensitivity of MRI to ……. Etc.
Establish ……Etc.
And complete them after read the feedback please on aim section in Feedback EEDRIP file.
She ask me write the like that.
Plagiarism: lower than 5% please.
References: recent and strong please (I need some reference from 2014) (no more 10 yrs. please)
N.B/ I have attached file as sample it’s completely different in topic and style but may be help you in structure or style of writing.
Best wishes.
