Topic – Is sending students for overseas university study beneficial to a country?
INTRODUCTION
Hook / attention grabber (please don’t put anything about “nowadays” – be original! J)
- Studying overseas gives several advantages for all, either country or people.
Background to topic
- Some governments invest on students who study abroad. The different of education system between counties will graduate well experienced generation, and they will make changes in good way.
THESIS (topic + main point 1 + main point 2 + main point 3 … make it general)
- This research will focus on studying abroad and look for the benefits of this investment for the country and the society. The three main point of the research will be education system, life style experience and economic income for the country.
BODY PARAGRAPH 1
Topic sentence (topic + main point)
- Firstly, every country have a different education system than another. Students who study in different country will have better education knowledge and experience.
Support
- Enrolling in a study abroad program, increase the chance to see a side of the majors that may not been exposed to at home. (Corporation,2016)
Transition
- Also this experience will lead to more benefits.
Support
- Studying overseas programs may provide graduates with the skills and the experience employers are looking for. (Pietro, nd)
Concluding sentence
- Students will travel to study because of the different of the interests, and it will provide different skills for the graduates.
BODY PARAGRAPH 2
Transition
- Secondly, the life style of students who travel will change in better way.
Topic sentence (topic + main point)
- The opportunity to see the world. By studying abroad, the experience of brand-new country with new outlooks and activities.
Support
- For example, if you study in Germany, you’ll have the option to travel through various parts of Europe.
Transition
- Moreover, traveling will provide better understanding for the nation’s people and history. There will be the opportunity to witness a completely new way of life. (Corporation,2016)
Support
- Also the chance to discover other new and exciting forms of entertainment. Such as Plays, movies, dancing, nightclubs, and all life style in general.
Concluding sentence
- The life style of new generation will change and will be mixed with other cultures.
BODY PARAGRAPH 3
Transition
- Thirdly, the foreign student will affect the economy of the country.
Topic sentence (topic + main point)
- Studying abroad will move the economy of the country. And it will increase the money spending and transferring.
Support
- Students who is living in the country will spend their money for accommodation and food and other entertainments. (Throsby, n.d.)
Transition
- In addition, the economy of country get pros of studying abroad.
Support
- The governments are looking to advance their economy and improve a country’s capacity and potential for innovation in areas relating to science, technology, engineering and mathematics, (Rumbley, 2014)
Concluding sentence
- Economically it’s better to study abroad, because of the benefits for the country and society.
| References
Corporation, E. I. (2016). 10 Benefits to Studying Abroad. Retrieved from internationalstudent: http://www.internationalstudent.com/study-abroad/guide/ten-benefits-to-studying-abroad/ Houston, J. (2015, Jun 2). Why the Future of American Intellectualism Depends on Study Abroad. Retrieved February 14, 2016, from huffingtonpost: http://www.huffingtonpost.com/jordan-houston/why-the-future-of-america_b_6994426.html?CFID=6174953&CFTOKEN=34d15484687714d4-D209BC18-BA1A-34AB-037AFEF979593A68 Pietro, G. D. (n.d.). University study abroad and graduates’ employability. Retrieved from wol.iza: http://wol.iza.org/articles/university-study-abroad-and-graduates-employability/long Rumbley, L. E. (2014, May 1). Why sponsor students to study abroad? Retrieved February 14, 2016, from britishcouncil: https://www.britishcouncil.org/voices-magazine/why-sponsor-students-to-study-abroad Throsby, D. (n.d.). The Economic Costs and Benefits of International Student Flows. Retrieved from oecd: http://www.oecd.org/sti/inno/2093396.pdf
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Appendix
Figure 1: How Students Choose a Foreign University to Attend?
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http://wol.iza.org/articles/university-study-abroad-and-graduates-employability/long
Figure 3: Are studies More Beneficial in Abroad?
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http://www.hotcoursesabroad.com/india/why-study-abroad/study-in-india-or-abroad/
