Hi Writer
Will like you to rewrite the below work. I think the maternity one needs most changes and the area highlighted colored (red and orange) should be completely removed. Also want a systematic writing using GIBBs relective model detailing each stage of the reflective model to action plan
For the Learning disability want a systematic writing using GIBBs relective model detailing each stage of the reflective model. Convert it same story ysing gibbsmode detailing each stages
Please note It is a reflective essay but I did not work but Observed (An active Observer)
So the aim is to visit those two fields (learning disability residential home =1100words) and maternity ward not to work but to observe =1100 words ) and then using reflective model . My experience according to THOUGHTS,FEELINGDS AND EMOTIONS and how this might impact on others.PLEASE NOTE MORE EMPHASIS ON MYSELF HOW I WAS FEELING AT THAT TIME and less emphasis on others.
Note learning disability =1000words
maternity=100words
