OTHER: hello, I have showed my paper to my proffesor and she say it needs some fixing:
1. the essay plan needs to be devided into intro, body 1,2,3.. then conclusion with a breif explnaition about each one of them (sources included)
2. she said that more critical thinking and analysis should be included in the paragraphs
3. In the introduction at the end i need to clarify what I’ll be talking about by dividing the essay into subthemes, by saying fristly …. will be analyzed, secondly, thirdly and so on.
4. when talking about men in the introduction i need to explain why i ncluded this as im talking about women’s selfesteem
5.when writing the body paragraphs i need and introduction line for each one of them for example the first sub theme discusses……,
6. the refrencing is missing in some places
the proffesor also wrote some coments on the first two papers for guidance, i will attach them in the files section
thank you!
