I am having trouble putting together a personal statement for why I want to go to medical school. I have multiple ideas and want a theme but I have not been able to put it all together and make it shine. I have attached a document with a personal statement that has no direction yet. I am applying in upcoming years but want to make sure my personal statement is really really well written and gets the readers attention. My advisor wants to start working on drafts and maybe I may end up applying this year.
We can go back and forth in messaging if you need additional information than one I have provided in my document.
